This week my partner and I finished our opening sequence and we also watched our peers work and gave them feedback as to what we thought about their opening sequence. The feedback we received was very constructive and it made us think how we could improve on our work. Some of our peers said that they could empathise with the protagonist, Sam and felt that we could have used more effects to show Sam's disorientation by making the argument in slow motion and making some of the shots more blurrier. They also said that the music was very effective and that its sets the mood of the film and starts off slow and becomes progressive and stronger towards the end, they considered this to be one of our strengths. However some of our peers said that their could have beee more dialogue and they did not like the voice over, one criticism that kept on occurring in the feedback was Sam's drunk acting, they all felt that this could have been better and it was not convincing enough and some went as far as saying that it broke the verisimilitude of the film. Our peers felt that the key shots that made emphasised the BSR genre was when Sam was walking down the alley way on his own and the long shot of him sitting in the corner alone and they felt that that the locations we used really reinforced the BSR genre. Overall my partner and I were pleased with the feedback we received.
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